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Quince de Julio, 2020 Hoy mi esposa y yo fuimos a la tienda de anime. Pero la tienda que fuimos no fui donde quieríamos ir. Tenía solo juegos de mesa. No tenemos interés por los juegos. Quisimos ver a cosas de anime de japónes. Nos quedamos decepcionados. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ((What I want to describe here is...)) Today my husband and I went to a store that would be supposed to have some anime-related items. But the store we went only had board games, and it was not where we wanted to go. We are not interested in board games. We wanted to see some anime stuff. We were disappointed. I'm learning how to use the preterite tense appropriately. Thank you in advance!

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Quince de Julio, 2020

Hoy mi esposa y yo fuimos a la tienda de anime. Pero la tienda a la que fuimos no fui fue donde quieríamos queríamos ir. Tenía solo juegos de mesa. No tenemos interés por los juegos. Quisimos ver a cosas de anime de japónes. Nos quedamos decepcionados.
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((What I want to describe here is...))
Today my husband and I went to a store that would be supposed to have some anime-related items. But the store we went only had board games, and it was not where we wanted to go. We are not interested in board games. We wanted to see some anime stuff. We were disappointed.

I'm learning how to use the preterite tense appropriately. Thank you in advance!

Muy pocos errores, puedes omitir algunas palabras, agregar algunas otras y corregir otras. Pero es un buen trabajo, sigue así!
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15 de Julio, 2020

Hoy mi esposa y yo fuimos a la tienda de anime. Pero la tienda a la que fuimos, no era a la que queríamos ir, esta tenía solo juegos de mesa. No teníamos interés por estos juegos. Queríamos ver cosas de anime de Japón, pero quedamos decepcionados.
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((What I want to describe here is...))
Today my husband and I went to a store that would be supposed to have some anime-related items. But the store we went only had board games, and it was not where we wanted to go. We are not interested in board games. We wanted to see some anime stuff. We were disappointed.

I'm learning how to use the preterite tense appropriately. Thank you in advance!

Hola Sayuri 🤗
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Saludos desde Colombia.
Liliana.
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Quince de Julio, 2020

Hoy mi esposa y yo fuimos a la tienda de anime. Pero la tienda a la que fuimos no fui era a donde quieríamos ir. Tenía solo juegos de mesa. No tenemos interés por los juegos. Quisimos Queríamos ver a cosas de anime de japónes. Nos quedamos decepcionados.
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((What I want to describe here is...))
Today my husband and I went to a store that would be supposed to have some anime-related items. But the store we went only had board games, and it was not where we wanted to go. We are not interested in board games. We wanted to see some anime stuff. We were disappointed.

I'm learning how to use the preterite tense appropriately. Thank you in advance!

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