hi, could someone check this text please :D
I have always wanted to skydive, but I'm afraid of heights. I have been improving my fear step by step, however, I have done "rappel" and "tirolesa". Now I hope to overcome the paraglider and then cheer me up to skydiving.
Since I live in Chile I have wanted to travel to the south of Chile.I would like to know the "torres del paine" and the glaciers, in this country the nature is surprising and beautiful, I didn’t know that I would like this country so much.
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hi, could someone check this text please :D
I have always wanted to skydive, but I'm afraid of heights. I have been improving my fear step by step, *for example* I have done "rappel" and "tirolesa". Now I hope to overcome *my fear* and then *get excited about* skydiving.
Since I live in Chile I have wanted to travel to the *southern parts of it*. I would like to *see* the "torres del paine" and the glaciers. In this country the nature is surprising and beautiful. I didn’t know that I would like this country so much.
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I hope that helps,
You did a great job! I just made a few minor corrections to help it flow a little better.
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I've always wanted to skydive, but I'm afraid of heights. However, I've been improving my fear step by step as I've done "rappel" and "tirolesa". Now, I hope to overcome the paraglider and through that build up my courage to skydive.
Since living in Chile, I've wanted to travel to the South of the country to see the "torres del paine" and the glaciers since the nature of Southern Chile is said to be surprising and beautiful-- I didn’t know I would like this country so much.
[The text had no major problems, I just made it sound a little more natural! :) ]
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I have been overcoming my fear...
...rappelling and the zip line. Now, I hope to conquer the paraglider.
... and the glaciers. In this country, the nature...
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