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Proposal Ecological approach that might be taken in organisations Introduction The principal aim of this proposal is to convince the organisation 'Spanish technology' to use resources in a conscientious way and to diminish substantially the amount of waste. In this proposal I will provide a description of the current situation and make recommendations as to how the situation could be improved. Fuel 'Spanish high-tech' is a domestic company which is at the cutting edge of technology in Europe. This organisation has it own transport system in which a myriad of products are delivered to small businesses. For this reason, there is a great consumption of petrol which is a precious resource in this day and age. On top of that, this company is facing legal woes because its level of emissions of greenhouse gases are unlawful. Plastic bags According to a research study carried out by British environmentalists, numerous plastic bags have been reported to be sold depite the strict regulations established by the Spanish authorities. Surprinsingy, this organisation is one of many which has declared in an official statement that the new regulation in that respect will not be cost-effective and, as a consequence, there would be financial losses. Recommendations Clearly, more could be done to turn this organisation into a carbon-zero company. I would make the following recommendations: -The use of electric hybryd electric vehicles might reduce the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere. -The sale of eco-friendly and biodegradable bags as a subtitute of the plastic ones. Unless these suggestions are implemented, it is unlikely that there will be any improvement in the short term.

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Proposal

Ecological approach that might be taken in organisations


Introduction
The principal aim of this proposal is to convince the organisation 'Spanish technology' to use resources in a conscientious way and to diminish/reduce substantially the amount of waste. In this proposal I will provide a description of the current situation and make recommendations as to how the situation could be improved.


Fuel
'Spanish high-tech' is a domestic company which is at the cutting edge of technology in Europe. This organisation has it own transportation system in which a myriad of products are delivered to small businesses. For this reason, there is a great consumption of oil which is a precious resource in this day and age. On top of that, this company is facing legal woes because its level of emissions of greenhouse gases are unlawful.

Plastic bags

According to a research study carried out by British environmentalists, numerous plastic bags have been reported to be sold despite the strict regulations established by the Spanish authorities. Surprisingly, this organisation is one of many which has declared in an official statement that the new regulation in that respect will not be cost-effective and, as a consequence, there would be financial losses.


Recommendations

Clearly, more could be done to turn this organisation into a carbon-zero company. I would make the following recommendations:

-The use of electric hybrid electric vehicles might reduce the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.
-The sale of eco-friendly and biodegradable bags as a substitute of the plastic ones.

Unless these suggestions are implemented, it is unlikely that there will be any improvement in the short term.

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Proposal

Ecological approaches that might be taken in organisations


Introduction
The principal aim of this proposal is to convince the organisation 'Spanish technology' to use resources in a conscientious way and to diminish substantially the amount of waste substantially diminish/decrease their waste. In this proposal I will provide a description of the current situation and make recommendations as to how the situation could be improved.


Fuel
'Spanish high-tech' is a domestic company which is at the cutting edge of technology in Europe. This organisation has its own transport system in which a myriad of products are delivered to small businesses. For this reason, there is a great consumption of they consume great/large amounts of petrol which is a precious resource in this day and age. On top of that, this company is facing legal woes because its level of emissions of greenhouse gases are is unlawful. (or "because of unlawful levels of greenhouse gas emissions")

Plastic bags
According to a research study carried out by British environmentalists, numerous plastic bags have been reported to be sold despite the strict regulations established by the Spanish authorities. Surprisingly, this organisation is one of many which has declared in an official statement that the new regulation in that respect will not be cost-effective and, as a consequence, that (your original sentence is correct, but I think 'that there would be...' sounds better. It's a stylistic choice though) there would be financial losses.


Recommendations
Clearly, more could be done to turn this organisation into a carbon-zero carbon-neutral (this is more common in the U.S. - I'm not sure about elsewhere) company. I would make the following recommendations:
-The use of electric hybrid electric vehicles might reduce limit the release of carbon dioxide into the atmosphere.
-The sale of eco-friendly and biodegradable bags as a substitute of the for plastic ones.

Unless these suggestions are implemented, it is unlikely that there will be any improvement in the short term.

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