a family description practicing the relative pronouns
Pablo who is son of pablo who was born in italy and was married with Elizabeth whose advices I appreciate, is married with Rosalba who is a teacher and daughter of pablo who was a fisherman and cruz who cared me when I was a child.
Rosalba that is the oldest of 3 brothers has hair whose color is black is short and curly, she has a daughter who is my sister and she has a child who is my nephew and is called liam. however, I have a brother called pablo who is chef in Argentina we share the same father but not the same mother.
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a family description practicing the relative pronouns
Pablo, who is the son of Pablo, who was born in Italy and who married with Elizabeth, whose advices I appreciate, is married with Rosalba, who is a teacher and daughter of Pablo, who was a fisherman and cruz (?),who cared (took care of me) me when I was a child.
Rosalba, that who is the oldest of 3 brothers and whose has hair whose color is black, short, and curly, she has a daughter who is my sister and she(?) has a child who is my nephew and is called liam. however, I have a brother called pablo who is chef in Argentina. We share the same father but not the same mother.
Hi Pablo! You have many Pablos in your life, huh? Hahahaha
I think this may be an interesting exercise, and overall you did a great job with the relative pronouns. I just have a quick tip: in English, we don't use that many relative pronouns at once in one sentence because it gets a little confusing. For example, after you talked about Rosalba and her daughter, I didn't know who "she" in "she has a child" was because it can be both of them. In addition, another useful topic you can study is "restrictive and nonrestrictive clauses" which uses a lot of relative pronouns. I used commas to create nonrestrictive clauses, but if your intention was to write restrictive clauses, we can try it again together. Let me know if you have any questions!
Good Job!
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