How to view nagative press？（Please modify it for me）
Last night I searched out some news about an singer named Hanyun Zhang. I was so angry and sympathetic about her experience that I could not fell asleep till 3 a.m..
However, at this moment I am questioning myself that is it worth to have empathy for someone else on the internet? Do what they experience really matter to me? There is a whole bunch of miserable stories on the internet but we could hardly get access to first-hand data for the most of the time. You are limited to see the whole picture so it is hard to tell truth from lies. Sometimes it might be just some media agitating a fake or exaggerated news to obtain benefits of the network flow, but we crying and yelling on the internet, excited to find voices alike as if they were comrades in arms, and condemn people of other opinions with rage. I wonder if there is an ambit that within which seems rational for our emotional arouse, and the quickest and most effective way to exercise our duty to uphold justice on the Internet without being engulfed by uncontrollable emotions.
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How to view negative press？（Please modify it for me）
Last night I searched the news about a singer named Hanyun Zhang. I was so angry and felt so sympathetic about her experience that I could not fall asleep until 3 a.m..
However, at this moment I am asking myself whether it is worth it to have empathy for someone else on the internet. Does what they experience really matter to me? There is a whole bunch of miserable stories on the internet but we can hardly get access to the first-hand data most of the time. You can't see the whole picture, so it is hard to tell truth from lies. Sometimes it might just be some fake or exaggerated news to obtain the benefits of network flow, but we start crying and yelling on the internet, excited to find voices alike as if they were comrades in arms, and condemn people of other opinions with rage [ It would be best to make two sentences instead of one very long sentence here ]. I wonder if there is a rational ambit [ I had to look this up, you have a great vocabulary ] for our emotional arousal. What is the quickest and most effective way to exercise our duty to uphold justice on the Internet without being engulfed by uncontrollable emotions?
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