Please correct my formal letter 🙏
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing because I have a lot of things that I would like to say about your magazine. I am very happy to hear that you will publish some of the letters.
First of all, I would say that your magazine is one of the best scientific magazines at the moment. I like the different articles about wild animals and how we can protect them. I also think that it is a great idea to post the opinions of the scientists about the global warm problem.
It is an extremely interesting magazine, I love it because I´m not a scientist and they explain all the things in a simple way, in order to be more clear, and I understand everything very well.
In my opinion, I would suggest lowering the price of the magazine a little, because it is expensive, and it is difficult for me to afford it all the weeks.
Regarding the content, I think that it would be good to add something about physics, and for example black holes.
To sum up, I will be pleased to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Laura Pérez Riscos.
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Please correct my formal letter 🙏
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing because I have a lot of things that I would like to say about your magazine. I am very happy to hear that you will publish some of the letters.
First of all, I would like to say that your magazine is one of the best scientific magazines at the moment. I like the different articles about wild animals and how we can protect them. I also think that it is a great idea to post the opinions of scientists about Global Warming.
It is an extremely interesting magazine. I love it because I´m not a scientist and they explain everything in a simple way, in order to be more clear, and I understand everything very well.
In my opinion, I would suggest lowering the price of the magazine a little, because it is expensive, and it is difficult for me to buy it every week.
Regarding the content, I think that it would be good to add something about physics, eg., black holes.
To sum up, I will be pleased to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Laura Pérez Riscos.
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Great issue you have raised!
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Thank you Yasmin !!
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All in all, it's understandable with an exception of a few mistakes. I've added corrections in [] and edited your letter below. Try not to put comma (,) after 'and'.
I am writing [this letter/email] because I have a lot of things that I would like to say about your magazine. I [would like to express that i'm very] happy to hear that you will publish some of the letters.
First of all, I would say that your magazine is one of the best scientific magazines at the moment. I like the different articles about wild animals and how we can protect them. I also think that it is a great idea to post the opinions of the scientists about the global warm problem.
It is an extremely interesting magazine, I love it because I´m not a scientist and they explain all the things in a [simpler] way.
In my opinion, I would suggest lowering the price of the magazine a little because it is expensive and it is difficult for me to afford it [every week].
Regarding the content, I think that it would be good to add something about physics and for example, black holes.
I will be pleased to hear from you soon.
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