Travel abroad
Nowadays most young people are travelling to another country in order to find different kinds of opportunities, but do we depend on our skills so much?
It is often said that language is a big problem that we have to face when we travel to another country. But, surprisingly this is the best way to solve the problem, since you must talk or you will not be able to communicate with other people. You can start appliyng for a job with native customers, in this way you are going to improve and lose your fear.
As a result of go to live abroad, people will learn a lot of the new culture, and even if at first this may be odd, with time most people love the different culture.
In fact there are more advantages than disadvantages in go to another country, you will do lots of friends, and you will be get used to their habits. The most you stay with native people the better.
To sum up, people have to deal with many problems when they move abroad, however, on balance they are going to be benefitial for them.
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Travelling abroad (or "Foreign travel")
Nowadays most young people are travelling to another country in order to find different kinds of opportunities, but do we depend on our skills so much? (I'm not quite sure what you mean here. Perhaps "do we depend on our skills enough"? Or possibly "Do we use our skills enough?". I think you should add which skills you mean.)
It is often said that language is a big problem that we have to face when we travel to another country. But, surprisingly this is the best way to solve the problem, since you must talk or you will not be able to communicate with other people. You can start appliyng for a job with involving native speaking customers, in this way you are going to improve and lose your fear.
As a result of going to live abroad, people will learn a lot of the about a new culture, and even if at first this may be odd, with time most people love the different culture. (or "most people love it").
Odd and strange are very similar words, but I would use strange here. You are in a strange environment that is different to what you're used to.
In fact there are more advantages than disadvantages in going to another country. You will do make (hacer = do and make) lots of friends, and you will be get used to their habits. The most more you stay with native people the better.
To sum up, people have to deal with many problems when they move abroad, however, on balance, they are going to be beneficial for them.
(Instead of "on balance" you could say "in the long term it will benefit them")
Very good! Not many corrections at all. I've made a couple of suggestions to make the language sound a bit more natural, which I hope helps.
Be careful with hacer though. I can see how that's an easy mistake to make.
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