what do you think about viral video?
In my opinion of view, i think that the viral videos are entertaining and funny however many videos have high risk because makes dangerous activities.
Nowaday many people make the challenges of internet, for example, in the quarentine, the tik tok challenges went viral.
But, every viral video aren´t funny or good, since many challenges are having make dangerouss activities for the people. For example, if you don´t get some challenge, you will have a high punishment.
In conclusion, i think that the viral videos should be do for entertaing and not for hurt someone.
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I think this is a very good essay - especially the bits of grammar like the conditional and your style of writing . Your essay has a very clear beginning, middle and ending which is good for exams as well.
Beware of singular and plurals with the verb "to be". I am, you are etc, aren´t isn´t as well as plurals with the verb to have I have, he has etc...
what do you think about viral videos?
Nowadays many people make the challenges of internet, for example, in the quarantine, the tik tok challenges went viral.
But, every viral video aren´t isn´t funny or good, since many challenges are having to make dangerouss activities for the people. For example, if you don´t get some challenge, you will have a high punishment.
In conclusion, i think that the viral videos should be do for entertaining and not for to hurt someone.
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What do you think about viral videos?
In my opinion/From my point of view, I think that the viral videos are funny and entertaining. However, many videos have high risks because of some dangerous activities.
Nowadays many people do internet challenges, for example, during quarantine, the tik tok challenges went/have gone viral.
But, most viral videos aren´t funny or good, since many are only to force people to do challenges out of their willing. For example, if you don´t accept some challenge, you will be punished/endure a punishment. (Really?)
In conclusion, I think that the viral videos should only be for entertaining and not for hurting someone.
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