My flight across the channel(Composition of NCE lesson 20) 2020.6.7
In the Early morning I waited for twenty minutes but there were not any sign of Latham so I thought it's time to do a test flight and it went all well.
After about 30 minutes Latham still didn't show up therefore I started off my journey. Before long I could no longer see ships following below, I was suddenly alone in the sky and worried about directions. Tremendous sky above and broad sea below along with high winds made me quite enjoyed. Suddenly my engine got very hot but somehow it began to rain! The rainwater cooled my engine and saved my life out of question! Soon after I took a glimpse through the window, the land was ahead.
Although the outline of land was getting more distinct as my speed went up , I had to flew in a circle and looking for place to land. Finally a field appeared in my sight, about two minutes later, a policeman walked towards me said: 'Bonjour'.
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My flight across the channel(Composition of NCE lesson 20) 2020.6.7
In the Early morning, I waited for twenty minutes but there were not any was still no sign of Latham so I thought it's time to do a test flight and it went all well.
After about 30 minutes Latham still didn't show up therefore I started off my journey (either "I started off" or "I started my journey"). Before long, I could no longer see the ships following below, I was suddenly alone in the sky and worried about directions. Tremendous sky above and broad sea below along with high winds made me quite enjoyed , I was enjoying the flight. Suddenly my engine got very hot, but somehow it began to rain! The rainwater cooled my engine and saved my life out of without question! Soon after I took a glimpse through the window, the land was ahead.
Although the outline of land was getting more distinct as my speed went up [... as I got closer], I had to flew fly in a circle and look ing for a place to land. Finally a field appeared in my sight, . After landing, about two minutes later, a policeman walked towards me and said, 'Bonjour'.
Well done, it's very creative writing. My only feedback is that it is not clear to me what or who is Latham. At first I thought Latham was the name an airport or landing strip you were looking for. On reading further, I realised you had not taken off and were still on the ground, so it could not be an airport. So I'm guessing Latham must be a person, maybe a friend but I am still not sure.
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Hi there does anyone want to give a little advice? I would be grateful
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