the cat of my girlfriend
Today my girlfriend called me, she was worried because her cat is sick, it has a lot of little wounds in her ear. The wounds are like pimples. So I went for her home, got the cat in a transport box and go to the vet. In the clinic the cat has afraid about the local, because for in the past it took several injections here.
The vet exam the cat and say that pimples is a fungi and prescribed a shampoo anti-fungi and 12 pills for give it in 12 in 12 hours. When go back for the house of my girlfriend, I'm explaim to her abaout the sick, and she was relived
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My girlfriend's cat
Today my girlfriend called me, she was worried because her cat is sick; it has a lot of little wounds in its ear. The wounds are like pimples. So I went to her home, put the cat in a transport box and went to the vet. In the clinic the cat was afraid of its surroundings, because for in the past it had several injections there.
The vet examined the cat and said that the pimples are a fungi and prescribed an anti-fungi shampoo and 12 pills to give it in 12 in 12 hours. When I went back to my girlfriend's house, I explained the illness to her, and she was relieved.
✨ Great work! You wrote a really clear text about your girlfriend's cat. Most of the mistakes are simply verbs in the wrong tense, be sure to put verbs into the past tense when telling a story. I hope the cat's OK! ✨
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Today my girlfriend called me, she was worried because her cat is sick, it has a lot of little wounds in her its ear (it has ... In its, or she has ... In her). The wounds are like pimples. So I went for to her home, got put the cat in a transport box and go went (in the past) to the vet. In the clinic the cat has afraid was worried about the local (I'm not sure what you mean here. Do you mean the local anaesthetic injection?) , because for in the past it took has had several injections here there.
The vet examined (past) the cat and say said that the pimples is are a fungi and prescribed an anti-fungal shampoo anti-fungi and 12 pills for to give it in 12 in 12 hours. When go I went back for the house of my girlfriend to my girlfriend's house, I'm explaim to her abaout the sick i explained the illness to her, and she was relieved.
Be careful about tenses. You are talking about a story in the past here so you need to use the past tense (was/did/went/said/examined/explained). I hope the cats ok!
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