Diary - 20200614
Today sentence: "Every attempt is being made to ensure that these works of art are preserved for posterity."
Which art should we preserve? I don't know. I always think I have not a good feeling for arts. I don't understand why most people can talk many things about art in art gallery. When I visit one gallery, I always observe people behavior. Some people will say he/she can feel emotion from the pictures. Is really, or just self-righteous vanity?
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Diary - 20200614
Today's sentence: "Every attempt is being made to ensure that these works of art are preserved for posterity."
Which art should we preserve? I don't know. I always think ("I have always thought" sounds more natural) I don't have a good sense for arts(I don't understand art). I don't understand how most people can say many things about art in art galleries. When I visit a gallery, I always observe(notice) people's behavior. Some people will say he/she (they) can feel emotion from the pictures. Can they really, or is it just self-righteous vanity?
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Great job! I often feel the same way when I go to art galleries. But every once in a while, I see a work of art that takes my breath away and really makes me feel something.
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