Could you correct my English? Hi. I am studying English for TOEFL ibt. I am glad if you correct my English;) Thank you! It is better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. I think that it is better to save my money for some time in the future. I have two reasons to support this. First, I need money for treatment of my body. Now I am good body because I am young and have a strong body. But in the future, I don’t know whether I will still be heathy or not. For instance, some diseases are inherited form age to age. My grandfather died due to cancer so I can have a cancer in the future because this disease is inherited form age to age. Unfortunately my uncle was dead because of the same cancer. I know how money I need for treatment of cancer. It is difficult to make money as soon as possible. To prepare for sickness, I need to save money. Second, I may find big dream in the future. Of course, I have some dream to realize now. For example, I want to travel all over the world. Because the airplane tickets are very expensive, I have to earn money by working at the cram school. However, there is a possibility that I would find new dream which need a lot of money. Then if I don’t have enough money to make it, I will enforce to give it up. I don’t want to do like that because I want to try to do something which I am interested in forever. That is why I want to save money for the future.