The brotherhood of the masked ones
1.The structured ones: combines the mask with clothing, elegance above all. If from time to time they are 40 cm from a stranger, they desperately go out to bathe with chlorine, if possible.
2. Those who take life as it comes: in the antipodes of the previous ones, they mock the ancestors of fashion. Given all the security, elegance does not matter to anyone, so they go, literally in disguise, with garbage baskets on their heads, salad bowls or lampshades, it does not matter.
3. The expressive ones: they use patterned fabrics, with embroidery, appliques, glitters, badges. They print their brand because they want to scream who they are.
4. The rebels: they don't use it. They are immune, they say, to the pandemic that does not exist, of course, and it is an invention of doctors, who know nothing.
5. The minimalists: they choose white, they are introverts and they intend to mix with the masses; not because they are the same, but because they are so different that this is the opportunity to belong a little more.
6. The dark ones: they choose black. If the rest of the clothing is also black, this is a strong statement of principle.
7. Those who are out of place: they put the mask under their chin and speak to you very closely, you don't know why. You step back and they walk towards you. You walk away again, they come back again. And they keep talking to you!
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The brotherhood of the masked ones
1.The structured ones: combines (because the sentence is referring to "they" which is plural) the mask with clothing, elegance above all. If from time to time they are 40 cm from a stranger, they desperately go out to bathe with chlorine, if possible.
2. Those who take life as it comes: in the antipodes (not a commonly used word--I had to look it up. Perhaps try "comes: the antitheses of the ..." ) of the previous ones, they mock the ancestors of fashion. Given all the security, elegance does not matter to anyone (them), so they go, literally in disguise, with garbage baskets on their heads, salad bowls or lampshades, it does not matter.
3. The expressive ones: they use patterned fabrics, with embroidery, appliques, (appliqués) glitters, badges. They print their brand because they want to scream who they are.
4. The rebels: they don't use it (masks, so "them"). They are immune, they say, to the pandemic that does not exist, of course, and it is an invention of doctors, who know nothing.
5. The minimalists: they choose white, they are introverts and they intend to mix with the masses; not because they are the same, but because they are so different that this is the opportunity to belong a little more.
6. The dark ones: they choose black. If the rest of the (their) clothing is also black, this is a strong statement of principle.
7. Those who are out of place: they put the mask under their chins and speak to you very closely, you don't know why. You step back and they walk towards you. You walk away again, they come back again. And they keep talking to you!
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