Thank you so much for helping me with my essays. I hope you all have a nice day!! If you need any help with Chinese, I am always willing to help!

This is an amazing job, Chen! Impressively done! And to top it off, you have a wonderful handwriting (better then mine btw). There's nothing to fix besides the word "четыре", as Aleksandr Baranov mentioned. And some commas. For example, there should be no comma in your first sentence. But the second one would looks much better with a comma after the word "день". You can also use a colon (:) after word "фитнес-центр" in the third sentence. In this case the colon means "а именно" - it's a kind of clarifying. Btw the word "фитнес-центр" is spelled with a hyphen (-). There's no "ь" in "нравится" in this particular sentence: "Ей нравится готовить..." the testing question is "что делает?" (If there's no "ь" in the question, there's no it in the word). In the last sentence of part (2) you don't need a comma. I couldn't notice any other mistakes. And the ones I found are absolutely not significant. The most of Russian native speakers do them all. You can mastery your stile, if you want, but I should say, your Russian is almost perfect. Nicely done! :)

ей нравится (без "ь") подАрить

четыре