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Destiny The mankind has always looked for answers of the unknown. This curiosity, inherent to us, has driven society to a constant state of progression, each new year making new discoveries. However, there are certain questions for which we will never have the answer, and among them we have the following: does destiny exist? I always believed that we all are predestined. The main reason to accept that is considering life as a logical concatenation of events leading to some goal. If that wasn't the case, it would mean that our lives are just as arbitrary as the steps of a drunk. Life would just depend on how much bad or good luck you end up having. Thinking that way helped me clear many hurdles throughout the years, because I felt that every awful event had a reason behind it to take place. But this thought sets out a crucial dilemma: if we all are predestined and therefore everything that happens has a reason for occurring, atrocious acts like rapes or murders are also part of our individual fates? Perhaps the answer to the question about the existence of a destiny is right on the middle ground between the two conceptions: nor life is just simply arbitrary, nor it is all planned. It is clear that some mysteries escape the understanding of human mind. Accordingly, one must learn to live carrying unanswered questions in his bag; if not, life will become much more complicated for him than it actually is.

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Destiny

The Mankind has always looked for answers of to the unknown. This curiosity, inherent to us, has driven society to a constant state of progression, each new year making new discoveries. However, there are certain questions for which we will never have the answer and among them we have the following: does destiny exist?

I have always believed that we are all predestined. The main reason to accept that is considering life as a logical concatenation of events leading to some goal. If that wasn't the case, it would mean that our lives are just as arbitrary as the steps of a drunk. Life would just depend on how much bad or good luck you end up having. Thinking that way helped me clear many hurdles throughout the years, because I felt that every awful event had a reason behind it to take place. But this thought sets out a crucial dilemma: if we are all predestined and therefore everything that happens has a reason for occurring, are atrocious acts like rapes or murders also part of our individual fates?

Perhaps the answer to the question about the existence of a destiny is right on the middle ground between the two conceptions: life is neither just simply arbitrary, nor is it all planned. It is clear that some mysteries escape the understanding of the human mind. Accordingly, one must learn to live carrying unanswered questions in his bag; if not, life will become much more complicated for them than it actually is.

Hola, no está mal.
Hablamos de mankind en general y no es contable.
Cuando quieres contar el tiempo que llevas haciendo algo, (aquí always - desde siempre), hay que utilizar el tiempo perfecto: have + el participio pasado.
"One must learn" - one suena un poco antiguo o como habla la Reina de Inglaterra. Se puede decir "we" o "you" en general , (vosotros). Luego utilizas el pronombre "him" que tecnicamente para tercera persona singular es correcto, pero hoy en día está aceptado decir "them" para hablar de una persona si no sabemos si es hombre o mujer, aunque es un pronombre plural, en vez de decir el pronombre masculino "him".
Espero que eso te ayude. Saludos desde Córdoba. Simón.
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Destiny

Mankind has always looked for answers to the unknown. This curiosity, inherent to us, has driven society to a constant state of progression, each new year making new discoveries. However, there are certain questions for which we will never have the answer, and among them we have the following: Does destiny exist?

I have always believed that we all are predestined. The main reason that I accept this is considering life as a logical concatenation of events leading to some goal. If that wasn't the case, it would mean that our lives are just as arbitrary as the steps of a drunk. Life would just depend on how much bad or good luck you end up having.

Thinking that way has helped me clear many hurdles throughout the years, because I felt that every awful event had a reason behind it to take place. But this thought sets out a crucial dilemma: If we all are predestined and therefore everything that happens has a reason for occurring, atrocious acts like rapes or murders are also part of our individual fates?

Perhaps the answer to the question about the existence of a destiny is right in the middle ground between the two concepts: Nor life is just simply arbitrary, nor it is all planned. It is clear that some mysteries escape the understanding of human mind. Accordingly, one must learn to live carrying unanswered questions in his bag; if not, life will become much more complicated for him than it actually is.

Muy bien, bien escrito.

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