To Buy or to Rent
The house is not only the place of our residence, but also the harbor of our soul. The problem of buying house or renting house has attracted more and more attention in our society.
People's opinions are always different when they talk about the topic. There are some people who are support that people ought to rent houses. For the reason that they think housing price is too expensive to undertake. Furthermore, it's can reduce the available of land. However, a majority of people believe that take having a house for granted. In their impression, young people must have a suit of rooms when they want to get married.
When it comes to the topic, we should take into account all aspects of the problem. Therefore, according to my overall analysis, I prefer the first view. First and foremost, it's irrational for us to pay the house loan for the rest of our mainly lives. Second, the value of the house is not only reflected in its external structure, but also the people who are willing to accompany with you.
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To Buy or to Rent
The house is not only the place of our residence, but also the harbor of our soul. The problem of buying a house or renting a house has attracted more and more attention in our society.
People's opinions are always different when they talk about this topic. There are some people who support the idea that people ought to rent houses because they think that housing costs are too expensive to undertake. (I corrected this sentence because your original sentence was a sentence fragment.) Furthermore, it can reduce the availability of land. However, a majority of people believe that some take having a house for granted. In their impression, young people must have a suite of rooms when they want to get married.
When it comes to this topic/the topic of buying or renting a house, we should take into account all aspects of the problem. Therefore, according to my overall analysis, I prefer the first view. First and foremost, it's irrational for us to pay the house loan/morgage for the rest of our lives. Second, the value of the house is not only reflected in its external structure, but also the people who are willing to live(?) with you.
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