Rules in the middle School.
When I was in the middle school I had some rules. One of then was that we mustn’t use cell phone, we were required to use a specific card for call to my parents, only in cakes of emergent. Another was that we couldn’t use snickers of different colors only whites. We were required to arrive very clean and on time because after the 6:15 am we didn’t have more change, I remember that we have formed a file before to enter. I had a locker and it has been forbidden to get the same locker with another partner. I was punished because I had one locker with my best friend. In addition we had extracurricular classes on weekends, in my opinion it was fantastic because you could choose any sport that you like, in my cakes I choosed volleyball and I had my team. In conclusion I would like to come back at this time.
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Rules in the from middle school.
When I was in the middle school, I we had some rules. One of then them was that we mustn’t use our cell phones,. [1] We were required to use a specific card for to call to my our [2] parents, but only in cakes cases of emergent emergency. Another was that we couldn’t use snickers stickers of different colors, only white ones. We were required to arrive very clean and on time because after the 6:15 am we didn’t have any more changes [3]. I remember that we have formed a single file line before to enter the school. I had a locker and it has been was forbidden to get share the same locker with another a partner. I was punished because I had one a [4] locker with my best friend. In addition, we had extracurricular classes on the weekends, in my opinion it which was fantastic because you could choose any sport that you liked. In my cakes case, I choosed chose [5] volleyball and I had joined my team. In conclusion, I would like to come go back at to this time.
[1] - "Mustn't" is most common in British English and is used less frequently in other regional variations. "Cell phone" is American/Canadian whereas "mobile phone" would be British. There's nothing wrong about the terms you used, but it's useful for you to know the regional variations. To me, it feels strange reading "mustn't" and "cell phone" next to each other because of the regional differences.
[2] - Use "our" because you started the sentence with "we".
[3] - I'm not entirely sure what you meant here; class changes?
[4] - Using "one" places an emphasis onto the number of lockers which is unnecessary in this sentence.
[5] - The past tense of "to choose" is "chose", not "choosed".
Feel free to ask me any questions you have.
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Rules in the middle School.
When I was in the middle school I had some rules. One of then them was that we mustn’t use cell phones, we were required to use a specific card for call to my parents to call our parents, only in cakes of emergent case of emergency. Another was that we couldn’t use wear snickers sneakers of different colors, only whites. We were required to arrive very clean and on time because after the 6:15 am we didn’t have more change (Usted puede explicar la palabra "Change"? quizas puedo ayudarle con una palabra correcta), I remember that we have formed a file before to enter. I had a locker and it has been was forbidden to get the same locker with another share lockers with a partner. I was punished because I had one a locker with my best friend. In addition we had extracurricular classes on weekends, in my opinion it was fantastic because you could choose any sport that you like,. In my cakes case I choosed chose volleyball and I had my team. In conclusion I would like to come back at go back to this time.
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thaks a lot.
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Well done!
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