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Where to Live The recent years have witnessed a growing tendency that an increasing number of people have been participating in a hot discussion about where to live. This highly debated topic has triggered considerable public concern. People's opinions are always different when they talk about a topic. There are some people who are willing to live in small towns. They believe that living in a small towns without too much pressure. It's cheap to live to small towns than in big cities. However, a majority of people don't think so. They believe that it's better on living in big cities instead of living in small towns. Considering that big cities convenient to travel, and big cities have more opportunity to make money than small towns. When it comes to the topic, we should take into account all aspects of the problems. Therefore, according to my overall analysis, I prefer to live in small towns. First, my hometown is a small town. I am happy to live there. Furthermore, I believe that small towns not only have little pressure but also too much fresh air than big cities. last but not least, with the development of science and technology, the technology level of small town is also very high.

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Where to Live

The recent years have witnessed a growing tendency that an increasing number of people have been participating in a hot discussion about where to live. This highly debated topic has triggered considerable public concern.
People's opinions are always different when they talk about a topic. There are some people who are willing to live in small towns. They believe that living in a small town without too much pressure. It's cheaper to live in small towns than in big cities. However, a majority of people don't think so. They believe that it's better on living in big cities instead of living in small towns. Considering that in big cities it is convenient to travel, and big cities have more opportunities to make money than small towns.
When it comes to the topic, we should take into account all aspects of the problems. Therefore, according to my overall analysis, I prefer to live in small towns. First, my hometown is a small town. I am happy to live there. Furthermore, I believe that small towns not only have little pressure but also too much fresh air than big cities. Last but not least, with the development of science and technology, the technology level of small town is also very high.

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