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summer In summer , I feel very nice .do you agree with me ? In summer ,grils can dress their beautiful dresses .children can eat ice cream what they very like . boys can swim in the sea .we can go to seaside .we can share our happiness in summer . But in other hand ,some people don't like go out in summer because the weather is too hot .we want to stay at home .hha .but in my opinon, go out to enjoy the sunshine and fresh breath is good for our health .if you think the weather is too hot ,we could do some sports on the afternoon and go walk on the nigh .Do you think it is a good idea ? So take action !enjioy summer !enjoy the sunshine and freash breath !

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In summer, I feel very nice .do Do you agree with me ? In summer ,grilsgirls can dress put on their beautiful dresses .Children can eat ice cream which they like very much what they very like .
Boys can swim in the sea .We can go to the seaside .We can share our happiness in summer .
But in the other hand ,some people don't like to go out in summer because the weather is too hot. Theywe want to stay at home.hha .But in my opinon, going out to enjoy the sunshine and fresh air breath is good for our health .If you think the weather is too hot ,we could do some sports on in  the afternoon and go for walks on during the night nigh .Do you think it is a good idea? So take action. !enjioy Enjoy summer ! Enjoy enjoy the sunshine and freash breath  fresh air!

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