TSUNAMI

This May 11th, an earthquake shook me, my room, my house, Japan, and the sea.
It was so big and long.  The books and my Mac fell down. (From the shelf?)

After a while, my family got back home and they are safe.
After that, I saw hell on TV. It was living hell. Everything was gulped.
Maybe it started then, I felt this was other people's affairs in the back of my mind. I remembered what Michael Sandel said. He said communitarianism.

Newscaster always tell me about injured Japanese people at a disaster {happened abroad?}. Like it is most important thing.

But I think it's not wrong.
It may sound like I stick up for myself, but I'm glad that my family was safe.
And I can't think that has happened in Japan, because hell on the television was too much.

I'm listening to John Lennon's voice.
I'm studying English.
I have a home to go back to.
and I have a family.

I'm full.

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TSUNAMI

This May 11, the earthquake shook me, my room, my house, Japan, and the sea.
It was a very long and destructive earthquake; the force of it threw books and the Mac was fell down due to the strength of the earthquake.

After awhile, my family got back home and they are safe.
After that, I saw hell on TV. That was a living hell. Everything were  was gulped.
Maybe it started then; I feel that this is other people's affairs in the back of my mind. I remembered what Michael Sandel said; He said "communitarianism."

The Newscasters are always telling me about the injured Japanese people in a disaster which happened abroad... like that was the most important thing.

But I think it's not wrong.
It may sound like I'm sticking up for myself, but I'm glad my family was safe.
And I can't think that this happened in this Japan, because seeing hell on television was too much.

I'm listening to John Lennon's voice.
I'm studying English.
I have a home to go back.
and I have a family.

I'm full.