A raining Rainy Day

This morning I slept very well. Suddenly a big loud thunderclap made woke me wake up. It made me feel uncomfortable. Then I got up and went to the washing room bathroom. This is the first thing I need to do everyday every day. Then I washed my face and brushed my teeth. I think thought this will would make me awake and take put me in a good mood in for the morning. During While I washed was washing my face, there were several more big loud thunderclaps, which made my heart beat faster. I am have been afraid of the loud thunder ever since I was young.
After washing, I made myself tidy, dressed, up my cloths and then ate something as my for breakfast. Everything was OK. Then I took my umbrella to go to my the office. At that time, I thought it would be have been a wonderful day if we had not needed to go to work in on such a heavy rainny rainy day. But it was impossible.On the road, I needed to walk to the subway station. Though it is not a long distance, it would takes me 10 ten mins minutes everyday every day. There was so much water on the road, like a small reiver river. My shoes hardly were hard to keep dry. They were wet. Finally I got into the subway station. There were so many people on the train. And there also had were several foreigners. I think they are beautiful girls. Because there was no sound announcement to tell us where we were, now so that I got off the subway one stop past my destination.
Then I got on the opposite subway line. One stop was OK. So, fast quickly, I finally arrived finally at the office. But outside now it stops stopped raining now. It was such a hurried morning today.

Be careful about tense. When telling a story like this, stay in one tense consistently, preferably the past tense, unless there is a good reason not to. In addition, avoid writing so many short sentences. Good writers vary the length of their sentences.