Hello everyone. Please, correct my mistakes.
The Wonderful Wizard of Oz, children’s book written by L. Frank Baum. The story was enormously popular and became a classic of children’s literature.
The main character of this book is a young farm girl named Dorothy. She and her pet dog Toto were swept away from their Kansas home by a cyclone. Then their adventures began in the magical land of Oz, where the characters have found so many new friends.
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Hello everyone. Please, correct my mistakes.
The Wonderful Wizard of Oz is a children’s book, written by L. Frank Baum. The story was enormously popular and became a classic of children’s literature.
The main character of this book is a young farm girl named Dorothy. She and her pet dog, Toto, were swept away from their Kansas home by a cyclone. Then their adventures began in the magical land of Oz, where the characters have found made so many new friends.
Privet Vera, really good.
Just a small point: I think technically, it is a tornado, when the vortex touches the ground. A cyclone is formed from a tropical storm. In the book and movie, I believe they called it a twister.
Keep practicing. Simon.
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Very well written, Vera! To add to Simon's point, you'd say "The Wonderful Wizard of Oz, a children's book written by L. Frank Baum" if something else came after it, like "The Wonderful Wizard of Oz, written by L. Frank Baum, was adapted into a film in the year 1939".
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children’s book was written by L. Frank Baum
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