I learned something meaningful (Am I correct?)
After school. I went shopping with my friend. We were going to across the road and I saw the old woman walked slowly and carry lots of commodities. But the passerby didn’t notice the old woman.
I was going to help the old woman, suddenly, a young man helped the old woman cross the road. I can’t forget the beautiful moment of the young guy helped the old woman.
From this experience, I learned that there are many kind people around the world.
Although many people are indifferent about the things happened in their life, but still many people are enthusiastic about helping other people.
It is cheerful for me to become such a kindness person. We sometimes need other people’s help to face the setback in our life.Likewise, other people also need help, we should lend our hand to help them as those who helping us.
Taiwan’s beautiful t scene is people. I learned it from this thing. To make the world peaceful, wonderful, we should encourage ourselves to be a better person to help those who in need.
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I learned something meaningful (Am I correct?)
After school I went shopping with my friend. We were going about to across the road and when I saw the an old woman walking slowly with her hands full and carrying lots of commodities. But the passersby didn’t notice the old woman.
I was going to help the old woman, when suddenly, a young man helped the old woman cross the road. I can’t forget the beautiful moment of that young guy who helped the old woman.
From this experience, I learned that there are many kind people around the world.
Although many people are indifferent about to the things happening in their life, but still many people are enthusiastic about helping other people.
It is cheerful for me to become such a kindness person. We sometimes need other people’s help to face the setbacks in our life. Likewise, other people also need help, so we should lend our a hand to help them as like those who have helped us.
Taiwan’s beautiful t scene is people. I learned it from this thing experience. To make the world peaceful, wonderful, we should encourage ourselves to be a better person to help those who are in need.
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I learned something meaningful (Am I correct?)
After school I went shopping with my friend. We were going to cross the road when I saw an old woman walking slowly and carrying lots of shopping??. There was a passer-by who didn’t notice the old woman.
I was going to help the old woman, but then suddenly, a young man appeared and helped the old woman cross the road. I can’t forget the beautiful moment when the young guy helped the old woman.
From this experience, I learned that there are many kinds of people around the world.
Although there are many people who are indifferent about things that have happened in their life, they can still be enthusiastic about helping other people.
It is cheerful for me to become such a kindness person???.
We sometimes need other people’s help to face setbacks in our life. Likewise, if other people also need help, we should lend a hand to help them, just as they would do for us.
I learned from this that the beautiful thing about Taiwan is the people.
To make the world peaceful and wonderful we should encourage each other to be better people and to help those who are in need.
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