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I like looking at the sky and regarding the stars. It's kind of pleasure. Sometimes I found beauty and obscurity in it. If I look at the sky for a long time, I will see the Milky Way. Of course, it is possible only in the village where were no big buildings or bright streetlights.
Have you ever seen the shooting star? I saw and I saw more than just one. Once I had a chance to see starfall. It was amazing! Thousands of stars are in the sky like someone scattered countless amount of sand grains in dark space.
Thank you for reading and correcting my note. Thank you very much))
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Could you correct me? It'sthe first time that I have used this function)
I like looking up at the sky and considering the stars. It's a kind of pleasure. Sometimes, I find beauty and obscurity in it. If I look at the sky for a long time, I can see the Milky Way. Of course, it is possible only in the village where there are no big buildings or bright streetlights.
Have you ever seen a shooting star? I saw one and there was more than just one. Once, I had a chance to see stars falling. It was amazing! Thousands of stars were in the sky and was as if someone had scattered countless amounts of sand grains in dark space.
Thank you for reading and correcting my notes. Thank you very much))
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