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Kill Time Indoors Nowadays, there exists a phenomenon in our society that many people like staying at home in their spare time, which has been in the limelight and has caused some concerns in the wider public. People's opinions are always different once they talk about a topic . There are some people who agree with the idea of staying at home in their spare time . For the reason that they think staying at home makes them feel more relaxed. However , a majority of people believe that is harmful to stay at home all the spare time . Considering that staying at home for a long time is not good for your health. When it comes to a topic, we should talk into account all aspects of the problems. Therefore , according to my overall analysis , I prefer the second view. Firstly, I prefer to go out and socialize rather than stay at home . Secondly I think going out for sports is a better choice than staying at home.

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Kill Time Indoors

Nowadays, there exists the phenomenon in our society that many people like staying at home in their spare time. This has been in the limelight and has caused some concerns in the wider public.
People's opinions are always different once they talk about a topic . There are some people who like the idea of staying at home in their spare time . They believe that staying at home makes them feel more relaxed. However , a majority of people believe that is harmful to spend all of your free time at home . Considering that, staying at home for a long time is not good for your health.
When it comes to a topic, we should take into account all aspects of the problem . Therefore , according to my overall analysis , I prefer the second view. Firstly, I prefer to go out and socialize rather than stay at home . Secondly I think going out for sports is a better choice than staying at home.

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