Traffic Jams
Nowadays the phenomenon of traffic jams is become more and more common in our society,which has been in the limelight and has caused wider concern.
There is no doubt that this phenomenon will pose a variety of possible detrimental impacts ,which not only create more air pollution in the city ,but also bring much inconvenience to the citizens.What are the specific reasons for the phenomenon ?I deem that the reasons of issue mainly lie in following aspects . Firstly ,the rapid increase in the number of private cars should be responsible for this problem.Secondly ,traffic control and road planning of the city are not always in step with the growth of the number of cars.
In view of the seriousness of the issue ,effective measures must be taken before the thing get worse .The government ought to carry out some laws and regulations to control the number of the private cars.Every citizen should make all efforts to obey the laws and regulations .With the measures be taken ,it's reasonable for us to believe that this problem will be solved in near future .
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Traffic Jams
Nowadays, the phenomenon of traffic jams is becoming more and more common in our society. which has This has recently been in the limelight, and has, causing wider concern.
There is no doubt that this phenomenon will pose a variety of possible detrimental impacts, which not only create some of which include more air pollution in the city, but also bring much and greater inconvenience to the citizens. What are the specific reasons for the phenomenon (I would say "traffic jams" here again, so that your reader knows which phenomenon you are talking about)? I deem believe that the reasons of for this issue mainly lie in the following aspects factors. Firstly, the rapid increase in the number of private cars should could be responsible for this problem. Secondly, traffic control and road planning of the city cities are not always in step with the growth of the number of cars.
In view of the seriousness of the this issue, effective measures must be taken before the thing things get worse. The government ought to carry out some create laws and regulations to control the number of the private cars permitted. Every citizen should make all efforts to obey the laws and regulations. With the measures be taken If these measures are followed, it's reasonable for us to believe that this problem will be solved in the near future.
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Great job! It would be interesting to see what our cities would look like with fewer cars.
One thing - for punctuation, for example: . , ! ? the punctuation follows the previous word, and then there is a space afterward. Ex: Yesterday, I went to the park. Hope that helps in future :)
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