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Shannon
J's nightmare. J dreamed about K again. The man with the red hair standing in the endless desert, the sunlight of Egypt blurred his face, and he was just like a ripple on a lake which gradually disappears when the wind stops. K seemed to trying speak to him, but they were so far away from each other, and the strong wind abruptly teared the words away. K gave up in the end, he waved at J with a desolate smile. How weird, just now J could see K’s face clearly. Suddenly, a dazzling light went straight to J’s eyes, then the alarm went off. J found himself soaked in sweat, dragging the shirt in his right hand. It’s the nightmare again. He never find a chance to bid farewell to his old friend and never could he.

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J's nightmare.

J dreamed about K again. The man with the red hair standing in the endless desert, the sunlight of Egypt blurred his face, and he was just like a ripple on a lake which gradually disappears when the wind stops. K seemed to be trying to speak to him, but they were so far away from each other, and the strong wind abruptly teared tore the words away. K gave up in the end, he waved at J with a desolate smile. How weird, just now J could see K’s face clearly. Suddenly, a dazzling light went straight to J’s eyes, then the alarm went off.

J found himself soaked in sweat, dragging the shirt in his right hand.
It’s the nightmare again.
He never find found a chance to bid farewell to his old friend and never could he.

abruptly: perhaps another adverb: cruelly
dragging: I'm not sure what you mean here. Maybe ... soaked in sweat, ripping his shirt with his right hand.
could: I think "would" works better here. Either, or. Your choice. Would - future. When the dream returns, he will never be able to talk to his friend ...

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