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“Hotel prices in Bogotá dropped” Every booking.com user in the world receives messages of this kind. Lots of them. Booking is behind you, travels with you, makes sure that you spend your money on their recommended hotels, or even on the rest, the not recommended ones. “Review score”, a 6.7 mark for “Hostal Conchita”, a hostal that you really like as you watch the pictures, and is located just 200 metres from the city center, town hall or parque central. “Something is wrong” the booking backpacker thinks. So you start reading the comments or you just decide to sleep somewhere else at once, despite the promising pictures and the unbeatable location.
Over the years i came to realize that other´s people comments on the net, somehow acquired a huge influence on our decissions. We look for comments to back up and reinforce our choices. We don´t have a look only on comments about hotels, we also read them when they are about restaurants, day trips, tourist guides and agencies, nightclubs, museums, taxi drivers, recepcionists, policemen and custom agents. We want to be safe. Whether the locals live safe in their own countries is something that normally won´t reach our travelling minds.
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Bookings 4
“Hotel prices in Bogotá have dropped” Every booking.com user in the world receives messages of this kind*. Lots of them. Booking.com is behind you, travels with you, makes sure that you spend your money on their recommended hotels, or even on the rest, the not recommended ones. “Review score”, a 6.7/10 mark score for “Hostal Conchita”, a hostal hostel that you really like as you watch look at the pictures, and is located just 200 metres from the city center, town hall or parque central park. “Something is wrong” the booking backpacker thinks. So you start reading the comments or you just decide to sleep somewhere else at once, despite the promising pictures and the unbeatable location.
Over the years i came to realize that other´s people's comments on the internet, have somehow become acquired *a huge influence on our decisions. We look for comments to back up and reinforce our choices. We don´t only have a look only at comments about hotels, we also read them when they are about restaurants, day trips, tourist guides and agencies, nightclubs, museums, taxi drivers, receptionists, policemen and custom agents. We want to be safe. Whether the locals live safe in their own countries is something that normally won´t reach occur to our travelling minds.
of this kind* : "of this kind" is very formal. I would say "like this" or "receives these types of messages", or "Every booking.com user is assaulted/bombarded/greeted with these messages day in day out"
Great job Andoni, and thanks again for your corrections. Let me know if you've got any questions!
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