Holding a community activity(Am I correct?)
If I have an opportunity to hold a community activity.
I would be apt to offer the assistance to the elderly. There are three reason about why I want to do it. First and foremost ,Taiwan is accelerated into the aging society, The population of who over 65years old is increasing rapidly.
Second, more and more teenagers are moved to the metropolis in order to gain better academic opportunities or work offers. Therefore, the elder who still dwell in their hometown would receive less care.
Third, I, living in the rural area, am observed the above circumstance in my hometown, this is an incentive for me to help them with my love and lend them a hand.
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Holding a community activity(Am I correct?)
If I have an opportunity to hold a community activity, it would will be apt for me to offer the assistance to the elderly. There are three reasons about why I want to do it.
First and foremost, Taiwan is has accelerated / is accelerating into the towards an ageing society: the population of who those over 65years old is increasing rapidly.
Second, more and more teenagers are moving to the metropolis in order to gain better academic opportunities or work offers. Therefore, the elders / elderly who still dwell in their hometown would receive less care.
Third, I live in the a rural area, am and have observed the above circumstance in my (very own) hometown. This is an incentive for me to help them with my love and to lend them a hand.
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Holding a community activity (Am I correct?)
If I have an opportunity to do a community activity.
I would be inclined to offer assistance to the elderly. There are three reasons why. First and foremost ,Taiwan is accelerating into an aged society. The number of 65 year-olds is increasing rapidly.
Second, more and more teenagers have moved to the metropolis in order to gain better academic opportunities or work offers. Therefore, the elders who still dwell in their hometown receive less care.
Third, I, living in a rural area, have observed the above circumstance in my hometown. This is an incentive for me to help them with my love and lend them a hand.
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