Secret spot
Centro cultural Gabriel Garcia Marquez
I knew this spot 5 years ago when I was buying a book in the bookstore into the Centro cultural Gabriel Garcia, from there I could see the stairs through the window, I wondered what way those reach, and turn out It was a beautiful viewpoint, you can see the Candelaria church and a lot of typical houses, I’ve gone there since I know it, it’s a good place if you would like have a time to relax and think about whatever you want, also if you like to have a picnic you can do it, I’ve never made one yet, but maybe It might be romantic if you go to your boyfriend or girlfriend, the best is that it’s free, you don’t need make a reservation or stuff like that, and you can be here the time that you want, the best way to get there It’s in public transportation, you should arrival to Museo del Oro stop, then you go straight ahead for 7th street you’ll see Candelaria church, turn left about 2 blocks, you can’t miss it.
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Secret spot
Centro Cultural Gabriel Garcia Marquez
I knew discovered (or ¨¨found¨¨) this spot 5 years ago when I was buying a book in the bookstore into in the Centro Cultural Gabriel Garcia. From there, I could see the stairs through the window. I wondered what way those reach (¨I wondered where those stairs went¨ or ¨I wondered what those stairs led to¨) , and it turned out that It was a beautiful viewpoint -- you can see the Candelaria Church and a lot of typical houses. I’ve gone there ¨often¨ (or ¨many times¨ or ¨ever¨) since I know discovered it. It’s a good place if you would like to have a time to relax (¨if you would like some time to relax´¨ is another option) and think about whatever you want. Also, if you´d like to have a picnic, you can do it there -- I’ve never made one yet, but maybe It might be romantic if you go to with your boyfriend or girlfriend. The best part is that it’s free, so you don’t need to make a reservation or stuff (or ¨anything¨) like that, and you can be here the time that you want (suggestions: ¨stay there as long as you like¨ or ¨go there anytime you want to¨). The best way to get there It’s in is public transportation. You should arrival to get off at the Museo del Oro stop, then you go straight ahead for to 7th street. You’ll see Candelaria church -- turn left and walk about 2 blocks, you can’t miss it.
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Hi Daniela, you´ve done a great job describing this place so well that I can almost imagine what it is like to be there. It sounds like a lovely little spot in your city.
I´ve written in green the words that will be more correct or sound more natural. The words in red are words that should be replaced by words in green. The color orange is changes that are more optional -- perhaps an additional option or a suggestion, rather than something that needs to be changed.
If you have any questions about the changes that I have suggested, please feel free to ask me.
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