My sister in law and her Kenya
My sister in law is a beautiful girl and much more inside. She likes animals in general but she loves her dog. It’s called Kenya and she adopted her when she lived in Madrid. Now, they live in the Notheast of Spain in a green village with a snowy mountains and cows, horses, goats, sheeps... Fortunately your job her allow help persons and animals that need it. This week helped an old woman that broken the hip. Two weeks ago helped a cow that had just given birth. I hope they continue this happy.
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My sister in law and her Kenya
My sister in law is a beautiful girl and much even more so inside. She likes animals in general, but most of all she loves her dog. It’s called Kenya and she adopted her when she lived in Madrid. Now, they live in the Northeast of Spain, in a green village with a snowy mountains and cows, horses, goats, sheeps... Fortunately, your her job allows her to help people and animals that need it. This week, she helped an old woman that (or "who") had broken her hip. Two weeks ago, she helped a cow that had just given birth. I hope they continue to be this happy.
Hola Arancha, no está mal. No te preocupes por los errores - podemos aprender de ellos.
"even more so inside" - incluso más (así) dentro.
Sheep es plural y singular. (Lo siento - ¡es inglés!)
One person - two or more people
En inglés, con las partes del cuerpo utilizamos el posesivo. ("Su" cadera en vez de "la")
Bueno, espero que eso te ayude y que estés aguantando la cuarentena. Saludos desde Córdoba. Simón.
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