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My journey to Bolivia [PART II] | Reasons why I organize this event | One of the main reasons we have been working and prepare this journey is the belief on happiness that every child deserve in the world when they are kids, the love of a father’s hug or a decent present in Christmas. My mum and I felt that and we thought, it would be perfect to do this in our journey to Bolivia. A year ago, I had organised something similar in another city, but never shared with anyone and preparing in detail like this. We find out that still, children are living in a hard and bad condition there, and fathers are struggling to put kids at school, many of them at Machua have not primary education and is hard to get to a pharmacy or even hospital in case of emergency. And we believed that the perfect place to do this was the community where my mum found grandma, after a long trip. The second reason was the situation in La Paz in Oct 2019, most communities around la Paz have been affected by political issues, so after that, it has been increasing the poorness in the rest of the small villages nearby including Machua. This was caused and damaged the city with many protesters setting fire to electoral offices across the country, and many injure and deaths.

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My journey to Bolivia [PART II]

| Reasons why I organize this event |

One of the main reasons we have been working and preparing for this journey, is the belief in happiness that every child in the world deserves when they are kids, the love of a father’s hug or a decent present in for Christmas. My mum and I felt that and we thought it would be perfect to do this on our journey to Bolivia. A year ago, I had organised something similar in another city, but never shared it with anyone and preparing in detail like this. We still find out that, children are living in a hard and bad conditions there, and fathers parents are struggling to put kids at through school; many of them at Machua have not got primary education and it is hard to get to a pharmacy or even a hospital in case of emergency. And We believed that the perfect place to do this was the community where my mum found grandma, after a long trip.

The second reason was the situation in La Paz in Oct 2019, where most communities around la Paz have been affected by political issues, so after that, it poverty has been increasing the poorness in the rest of the small villages nearby, including Machua. This was caused and has damaged the city, with many protesters setting fire to electoral offices across the country, and many injuries and deaths.

Hola Luis, no está mal.
Fathers solo son hombres.
La pobreza - poverty, pero nota que no lleva el artículo, "the" porque estamos hablando en general.
Es triste lo que pasa allí. Suerte.
Saludos desde España. Simón.

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