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A few months ago, when I was hanging out with my friends, I listened a guys saying that they could to be sure that tonight they were to hook up with some girl. That made me remember myself several years ago,
I thing that it’s a mistake propose you a goal that doesn’t up to you. Go out with your friends it’s enjoy with them, meet people but without a goal in your mind, because otherwise you can think that you have failed and that affects your self-steem.
In the tv serie westworld, one of the characters reach the conclusión that the consciousness isn’t the top of a pyramid, The consciousness is an introspection in itself with shape of maze with conciousness in the middle.
So, I reached the conclusión that the seduction, it isn’t try to catch the butterfly, it isn’t straight line to the objective. It’s to build at atmosphere, to create a garden where the butterfly wants come in, it’s a circle that spreads outwards.
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A few months ago, when I was hanging out with my friends, I listened a to some guys saying that they could to be were sure that tonight they were going to hook up with some girl. That made me remember myself several years ago,
I think that it’s a mistake propose you to set yourself a goal that isn’t up to you. Go out with your friends it’s to enjoy yourself with them, meet people, but without a goal in your mind, because otherwise you can think that you have failed and that affects your selfesteem.
In the tv series Westworld, one of the characters reaches (or, "comes to the conclusion") the conclusion that the consciousness isn’t the top of a pyramid, The consciousness is if not an introspection in itself with in the shape of a maze with consciousness in the middle.
So, I reached the conclusion that the seduction, it isn’t about trying to catch the butterfly, it isn’t a straight line towards the objective. It’s to building an atmosphere, to creating a garden where the butterfly wants to come in, it’s a circle that spreads outwards.
Hola Hector, no te preocupes por los errores - podemos aprender de ellos.
Sigue practicando. Saludos desde Córdoba. Simón.
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A few months ago, when I was hanging out with my friends, I listened to some guys saying that they wanted to make sure that tonight they were going to hook up with some girl. That made me remember several years ago thinking that it’s a mistake to propose a goal for yourself that isn't up to you. Go out with your friends and meet people because you enjoy it, but do it without a goal in mind, because otherwise you can think that you have failed and that affects your self-steem.
In the tv series westworld, one of the characters reaches the conclusion that consciousness isn’t the top of a pyramid, consciousness is self-introspection in the shape of a maze, with conciousness in the middle.
So, I reached the conclusion that the seduction, isn’t like try ing to catch a butterfly, it isn’t straight line to an objective. It’s about building an atmosphere, like creating a garden where the butterfly wants come in. It's a circle that spreads outwards.
Good job- most of my edits were changing little words- (by for, to) and the order of words. I love Westworld too!
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