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An essay Video games are very popular with children. However, some parents feel that video games can have a negative impact on their children, but others believe that they may have some positive effects. How do you feel about children playing video games? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Currently video games are very popular. Actually, playing video games can have a positive sides but also a negative side. I believe that it has more positive effects than bad ones and here is why. For one hand, video games can be used to educate. Some of them can teach children about some facts, like, history. It is well-known that if children enjoy learning, they will learn better. Therefore some video games are being using by teachers to teach efficiently. For the other hand, nowadays children spend lots of hours sitting down. This is the main cause they are getting overweigth which is terrible for their health. Most of video games need to be played on a seat, so it does not help definitely. Finally, video games can help to relieve stress. After a hard day working in schools, a good way to disconnect can be playing video games. In this way children can have an enjoyable time. In conclusion, video games have possitve and bad effects like it can help to educate or relax however they don't help with exercise. Then I believe they can be interesting to help but with a moderation.

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Video games are very popular with children. However, some parents feel that video games can have a negative impact on their children, but others believe that they may have some positive effects. How do you feel about children playing video games? Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Currently video games are very popular. Actually, playing video games can have a positive effect but also a negative affect. I believe that it has more positive effects than negative ones and here is why.

On one hand, video games can be used to educate. Some of them can teach children about some facts, like, history. It is well-known that if children enjoy learning, they will learn better. Therefore some video games are being used by teachers to teach efficiently.

On the other hand, nowadays children spend lots of hours sitting down. This is the main reason that they are becoming overweight which is terrible for their health. Most of video games need to be played sitting down, so it definitely does not help definitely.

Finally, video games can help to relieve stress. After a hard day working in schools, a good way to disconnect can be playing video games. In this way children can have an enjoyable time.

In conclusion, video games have positive and negative effects like helping to educate or relax however they don't help with exercise. Then I believe they can be interesting to help when used in moderation.

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