Flexible hose
At installation the maximum bend radius is to respect. The hose shall be inspecting for installation of damage and corrosion. Before installation all opening hoses shall be cover with a plug.
During the installation the hose shall be covert from mechanical forces. The movement of the hose shall be guaranteed without collision.
The hose shall not as earthing for welding machines.
Hose with pressing fitting connection
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Flexible hose
At installation the maximum bend radius is to respect (I don't understand this). The hose shall be inspected for installation of damage and corrosion. Before installation, all hose openings shall be covered with a plug.
During the installation the hose shall be covert (protected) from mechanical forces (I don't understand this). The movement of the hose shall be guaranteed without collision.
The hose shall not be used as a ground for welding machines.
Hose with pressing fitting connection (this is not a complete sentence)
THIS IS NOT A COMPLETE CORRECTION!!! I corrected your English grammar as the purpose of this site is to learn languages. Industrial instructions are still not written this way and would have to rewrite everything which I don't want to because I don't understand everything. I am saying my correction is an improvement but not 100%.
here's how i can help
"Before installation, all hose openings shall be covered with a plug." To me "shall" sounds weird because it is unsure who will be the one covering the plug. If I say something shall happen, it sounds like it will happen but that someone else will do it.
The building shall be constructed= Someone will build the building.
This is more how instructions are written
"Before installation, cover all hose openings with a plug." (The hoses are not plugged and you need to do it)...or
"Before installation, ensure all hose openings are covered with a plug." (the hoses should already be plugged but double check)
Hope that helps.
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