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Hello, I am glad to meet you,my new friend!My English name is liana,I came from Shan Dong province, which lies in the east of China. But currently, I settle down in Beijing, the capity of China. I am a student studying for PHD in medicine.I prefer to acquire belly dancing in my spare time, I have intermittently learned it for several years, though I am still not good at it, to me the whole process is very therapeutic. I know, many women in our country are skilled in cooking, while it's not my kind of thing.I'm also into travelling, When I used to have a vacation, I often went out to visit other city. Thus I have been to more than 20 cities in China. I even visited Thailand 3 years ago, but now I have to try my best to finish my scientific research task and my dissertation, so I have to delay my next travel plan. I also have a language complex, and I really want to improve my English, although I have studied English for more than 20 years, I still cannot write or speak in English freely, like most Chinese.
Anyway, I appreciate your help.
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1.self-introduction(Please help me correct my self-introduction)
Hello, I am glad to meet you, my new friend! My English name is lLiana,I came from Shan Dong province, which lies in the east of China. But currently, I have settled down in Beijing, the capity capital city of China. I am a student studying a PHD in medicine.I prefer to acquire learn belly dancing in my spare time, I have intermittently learned it for several years and though I am still not good at it, to me the whole process is very therapeutic. I know, many women in our country are skilled in cooking, while it's not my kind of thing. I'm also into travelling, When I used to have a went on vacation, I often went out to visit other cityies. Thus, I have been to more than 20 cities in China. I even visited Thailand 3 years ago, but now I have to try my best to finish my scientific research task and my dissertation, so I have to delay my next travel plans. I also have a language complex, and I really want to improve my English, although I have studied English for more than 20 years, I still cannot write or speak in English freely, like most Chinese people.
Anyway, I appreciate your help.
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Hello,
My English name is Liana and I am from Shan Dong province which lies in the east of China; but currently, I live down in Beijing, the capital of China. I am studying for a Ph.D. in medicine. I enjoy belly dancing in my spare time and I have been learning it for several years although I am still not good at it (it is pretty therapeutic for me). Many women in my country are skilled in cooking, but it's not my kind of thing <<you could add a little phrase here "it's not my cup of tea" which means the same thing as not my kind of thing if you would like>>. I also enjoy traveling. When I used to go on vacation, I enjoyed visiting other cities. Because of this, I have been to more than 20 cities in China. I even visited Thailand 3 years ago, but now I have to focus on my scientific research and my dissertation at school, so I have to delay my travel plans). I also really enjoy languages and I want to improve my English. Although I have studied English for more than 20 years, I still cannot write or speak in English as easily as in Chinese.
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