Breaking up with girlfriend.
I won't have been dating Mary for ten months by the next week. Our relationships lasted for two years and six months. It hurt me a lot and I was depressed last several months.
Actually I thought I would marry her soon because we had been getting over different obstacles for that time when we were together. I tried to be a man, I mean a man is who acts instead of having a big mouth. I was taught that way. I even took a loan for a mortgage to move in own apartment. I wanted we gonna be happy.
One of the main reasons for breaking up was a totally unacceptable relationship to me. I was breaking my back all the time and despite of my efforts it was not enough appreciating. Basically nothing bad happened. I'm happy I don't have any children from her. Anyways my future sweetie is waiting for me somewhere. And I'm sure everything is gonna be okay!
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Breaking Up With My Girlfriend.
My girlfriend and I stopped dating ten months ago. Our relationships lasted for two years and six months. It hurt me a lot and I was depressed for several months.
Actually I thought I would marry her soon because we had been through good and bad times together. I tried to be a man, I mean a man is a person who acts instead of having a big mouth. I was taught that way. I even took out a loan for a mortgage to move into our own apartment. I wanted for us to both be happy together.
One of the main reasons for breaking up was it was a totally unacceptable one way relationship in my mind. I was breaking my back all the time and despite all of my efforts I never felt appreciated or received words of appreciation. Basically nothing bad happened. I'm happy I didn't have any children with her. Anyways my future sweetie is waiting for me somewhere. And I'm sure everything is going to be okay!.
I would recommend simplifying the tenses and not attempting to use.
"I won't have been dating Mary--" because you then start with a phrase that is awkward to continue and connect together with "for" or "since".
"I won't have been dating Mary" may be grammatically acceptable but it is awkward.
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Breaking up with girlfriend.
I won't be dating Mary for ten months by the next week (Or: It will be 10 months next week since I stopped dating Mary). Our relationships lasted for two years and six months. It hurt me a lot and I was depressed for the last several months. (or over the past few monts)
Actually I thought I would marry her soon because we had been getting over different obstacles for that in/during the time when we were together. I tried to be a man,By a man I mean a man is someone who acts instead of having a big mouth. I was taught brought up that way. I even took a loan for a mortgage to move in with her into our own apartment. I wanted we gonna us to be happy.
One of the main reasons for breaking up was that it was a totally unacceptable relationship to me. I was breaking my back all the time and despite of my efforts it I was not being appreciated enough appreciating. Basically nothing bad happened. I'm happy I don't have any children from her. Anyways my future sweetie is waiting for me somewhere. And I'm sure everything is gonna be okay!
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I won't have been dating Mary for ten months by the next week. Our relationship lasted for two years and six months. It hurt me a lot and I was depressed for the last several months.
Actually I thought I would marry her soon because we had been getting over different obstacles in the time when we were together. I tried to be a man, I mean a man is who acts instead of having a big mouth. I was taught that way. I even took out a loan for a mortgage to move into our own apartment. I wanted us to be happy.
One of the main reasons for breaking up was a totally unacceptable relationship with me. I was breaking my back all the time and despite of my efforts there was not enough appreciation. Basically nothing bad happened. I'm happy I don't have any children from her. Anyways my future sweetie is waiting for me somewhere. And I'm sure everything is gonna be okay!
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