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Help me please! Please help to check this homework, VACATION OF A LIFETIME On my vacations I want to go to Italy with my family. Specifically Venice and enjoy with them the wonders that there is in this place. One way to get to our destination will be by plane, but first I have to reserve a hotel, probably one that is comfortable, for all the family, accessible, with good service and possibly with a pool. Time definitely counts, so I have to make sure the weather is good for the trip. I think we will be here for about a week. The first day we will rest. The second day one of the first things we will do will be to visit the Ducal Palace, then we will go to the Sant’ Elena Park and buy Ice cream, spend a relaxed afternoon. For the rest of the days what we will do it visit the Island of Burano, where it is famous for its colorful houses, to get there we will go by boat. We will go to the Merletto Museum where they make the lace of the area, too have lunch in one of its informal restaurants, and try its seafood, after that go to the famous and ancient Church of San Martino that has a 17th Century leaning bell and we will take many photos.

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VACATION OF A LIFETIME

I’m not saying that everything that you wrote that I changed was wrong, but it sounded choppy and not like a native speaker would say. Here is an example of what I might write to convey similar ideas. Hope it helps.

On my vacation (you are only talking about 1 vacation). I want to go to Italy with my family. I am especially looking forward to visiting Venice (specifically sounds very formal and the sentence wasn’t very natural before) because I have heard there are many wondrous things to see there. We will need to buy plane tickets, but first we will need to book a hotel. I want the hotel to be comfortable, have enough room for the whole family, it should be near the major tourist attractions, clean, and a pool would be a bonus.
(nobody says “One way to get to our destination” unless someone asked them what are all the ways to get there.They would say “we are going by plane” or “we chose to go by plane because it will be faster than going by train”)

the timing of the trip is important (nobody says “Time definitely counts”), I will need to plan to travel there when the weather will be nice. We will probably stay about a week.

The first day will be low key and we may need to recover from jet lag. The second day we will get up early to visit the Ducal Palace, then we will go to Sant’ Elena Park and buy ice cream. Another day we will take a boat to the Island of Burano, which is famous for its colorful houses. We also want to go to the Merletto Museum where they make lace. The museum also has several restaurants and I want to try the seafood there, After the museum we will also go to the famous and ancient Church of San Martino that has a 17th Century leaning bell. I am sure I will take so many photos to remember the trip!
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Help me please!

Please help to check this homework,

VACATION OF A LIFETIME

On my vacation, I want to go to Italy with my family. Specifically Venice and enjoy the wonders with them there. The way to get to our destination will be by plane, but first I have to reserve a hotel, probably one that is comfortable for the whole family, accessible, with good service and possibly with a pool. Time definitely counts, so I have to make sure the weather is good for the trip. I think we will go for about a week.

The first day we will rest. The second day, one of the first things we will do is to visit the Ducal Palace, from there we will go to the Sant’ Elena Park and buy ice cream, spend a relaxin afternoon. For the rest of the days, we will visit the Island of Burano, that is famous for it’s colorful houses, we will get there by boat. We will then go to the Merletto Museum where they make the lace of the area, to have lunch in one of its informal restaurants, and try its seafood. After that go to the famous and ancient Church of San Martino that has a 17th Century leaning bell and we will take many photos. It will be a vacation to remember!

last sentence is just a suggestion:)
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Help me please!

Please help to check this homework,

VACATION OF A LIFETIME

On my vacation, I want to go to Italy with my family. Specifically Venice, to enjoy with them the wonders that there are in this place. One way to get to our destination will be by plane, but first I have to reserve a hotel, probably one that is comfortable and accessible for everyone, with good service and possibly a pool. Timing definitely counts, so I have to make sure the weather is good for the trip. I think we will be there for about a week.

The first day we will rest. The second day one of the first things we will do will be to visit the Ducal Palace, then we will go to the Sant’ Elena Park and buy ice cream, spending the afternoon relaxing. For the rest of the week what we will visit the Island of Burano, which is famous for its colorful houses. To get there we will go by boat. We will go to the Merletto Museum where they make the lace sold in the area, have lunch in one of the informal restaurants, and try the seafood. After that, we will go to the famous and ancient Church of San Martino that has a 17th Century leaning bell, and we will take many photos.
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Help me please!

Please help to check this homework,

VACATION OF A LIFETIME

On my vacations I want to go to Italy with my family.
I would like to visit Italy with my family for the vacation. Especially ,Venice. It would be nice also if wondering around some landscapes which near by the area.
We are planing to visit there for a week by take airplane. But first of all, I might have to reserve a hotel which is comfortable, accessible ,available for pool with good services for my whole family. Second, the weather situation must be in concerned for make sure our trip will goes well.
Specifically Venice and enjoy with them the wonders that there is in this place. One way to get to our destination will be by plane, but first I have to reserve a hotel, probably one that is comfortable, for all the family, accessible, with good service and possibly with a pool. Time definitely counts, so I have to make sure the weather is good for the trip. I think we will be here for about a week.
The first day will be our rest day. On the second day, we will visit Ducal palace at first. After that ,visit Sant’Elena park and have some ice cream will be in our plan for spending some relaxin time at the afternoon. On the following days we will head forward to Burano with boat. Explore the island which is famous of colorful houses. Besides, Merletto Museum definitely would be in our plan to learn about how to make lace. Also, we would love to have some seafood at local restaurant as our lunch.
To see 17th century leaning bell in ancient church of San Martino would be our next schedule. In additions , we absolutely gonna take a lot of photos during this journey for keep these beautiful memories.
The first day we will rest. The second day one of the first things we will do will be to visit the Ducal Palace, then we will go to the Sant’ Elena Park and buy Ice cream, spend a relaxed afternoon. For the rest of the days what we will do it visit the Island of Burano, where it is famous for its colorful houses, to get there we will go by boat. We will go to the Merletto Museum where they make the lace of the area, too have lunch in one of its informal restaurants, and try its seafood, after that go to the famous and ancient Church of San Martino that has a 17th Century leaning bell and we will take many photos.

above is my suggestion:)
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Native speaker. I may say it this way....

VACATION OF A LIFETIME

On my vacation, I want to go to Italy with my family. Specifically, I would like to go to Venice. The best way to get to Venice from _____ would be by plane, but first I have to reserve a hotel. My ideal hotel would be comfortable, with good service and a pool. We will travel in June to make sure the weather is good for our week in Italy.

The first day we will unpack, shower, and rest.

The second day, one of the first things we will do will be to visit the Ducal Palace. In the afternoon, we will go to the Sant’ Elena Park and buy ice cream and relax in the shade.

For the rest of the days, we will travel by boat to the the Island of Burano, which is famous for its colorful houses. We will also go to the Merletto Museum where they make lace, have lunch in a restaurant, and try the seafood. After that, we may go to the famous Church of San Martino to see the a 17th Century leaning bell. Of course, we will take lots of pictures.

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