Today's though
Today I come up to thie webstie after years of absent. How lucky I had registered an account before the registration suspend. It might be an arrangement of God. When I got lost, there is a opened door waiting for me.
Lately I'm under pressure due to my current position required relatetively high English level. After years of self-study, I'm still not confident in writing in English. Atfer thinking carefully, I figure out I have been writing wirhout feedback from natvie all these years. Without proper feedback neither I could find my own mistake nor build up my confident by getting positive feedback.
Therefore I decided to continue my journey on Lang-8 again to help myself and others to improve the language they going for.
Appriciate your in correcting my mistake. If it comes it with explanation, it would be grateful.
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Today's Thought
Today I returned to this website after years of being absent. (came back = returned)
How lucky that I had registered an account before the registration was suspended.
or How lucky it was that I had... ...the registration ended.
(I'm not sure I understand. Perhaps --->) How lucky it is that I am using my account again before the registration was suspended.
It might be an arrangement of God.
When I got lost, there was an opened door waiting for me. (in the past)
or When I get lost, there is an open door waiting for me. (in the present - it continues to happen)
Lately I'm under pressure due to my current position, which requires a relatively high English level. After years of self-study, I'm still not confident in writing in English. After thinking carefully, I figured out that I have been writing without feedback from native-speakers all these years. Without proper feedback, neither I could neither find my own mistakes nor build up my confident by getting positive feedback.
Therefore I decided to continue my journey on Lang-8 again to help myself and others to improve the language [they are going for.] or [they are learning.]
I appreciate your in correcting my mistake. If it comes it with an explanation, I would be grateful.
It might seem like I changed a lot, but your writing is good with some complicated sentence structure. I hope you understand my changes. Good luck.
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Today's though
Today I have come up to this website after years of absence. How lucky that I had registered an account before the registration was suspend. It might be an arrangement of God. When I got lost, there is was an opened door waiting for me.
Lately I'm I've been under pressure due to my current position which requires a relatively high English level. After years of self-study, I'm still not confident in writing in English. Atfer thinking carefully / reflecting, I figured out I have been writing without feedback from natives all these years. Without proper feedback, neither I could niether find my own mistakes nor build up my confidence by getting positive feedback.
Therefore, I decided to continue my journey on Lang-8 again to help myself and others to improve the language they are going for.
Appreciate you in correcting my mistakes. If it comes it with explanation, i would be grateful.
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