My Future Trip
Today is a perfect time to make a line for our future trips and rethink what will be the most important one. When we finally come back to our usual life I would like to go to Berlin. I was there last August, visited famous landmarks and a few bars. I want to do it again: go through Brandenburg Gate and walk near Berlin Wall, lay and drink coffee on the grass at Gendarmenmarkt square, climb on the top of the Victory Column, eat at Leipziger Platz. Moreover, this city has so many historic links between European countries and it makes me wonder to read more about it. Seems like my visiting of Reichstag dome, Alte Nationalgalerie inspires me to start to learn German.
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My Future Trip
Today is a perfect time to make a line for our future trips and rethink what will be the most important one. When we finally go back to our usual life, I would like to go to Berlin. I was there last August, visited famous landmarks and a few bars. I want to do it again: go through Brandenburg Gate and walk near Berlin Wall, lay down and drink coffee on the grass at Gendarmenmarkt square, climb on the top of the Victory Column, eat at Leipziger Platz. Moreover, this city has so many historic links between European countries and it makes me wonder to read more about it. Seems like my visit of Reichstag dome, Alte Nationalgalerie inspired me to start to learning German.
The things that I highlighted were because I didn't quite understand what you wanted to say.
For "line," I think you might want to use a different word.
Wonder to read" isn't quite right. But you might want to say that you "wanted to read more about it" or that it "made you wonder about them."
Hope this helps!
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"it makes me wonder to read more about it."
"It makes me want to read more about it."
Or:
"It inspires me to read more about it."
[I think you mean the second one.]
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