Vivi's vacation in a small village
It's a story about Vivi's vacation in the winter last year. In that week, Vivi stayed in a cozy hotel in the small quiet village with the enjoyment of tranquility with her two friends.
But tonight was a little different. When they came back to the hotel from the dinner and heard something rather noisy inside their room. They were scared to open the door and Vivi want to the counter to ask for help, then they came back and opened the door the light illuminate all the room immdiately. In that moment "Oh my god!" they cried together.
The room was all messy, everything dropped down to the floor, and the window was broken rather than open and the snow though into the room and rather cold. No one in the room, someone or something had escaped.
They initial scared was soon replaced by anger and one of her friends started to cry despite herself. Vivi quickly checked everything in the room especially the safe in the wardrobe. Fortunately, nothing valuable was missing.
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Vivi's vacation in a small village
This is It's a story about Vivi's vacation in the winter last year. In that week, Vivi stayed in a cozy hotel in the a small quiet village with the enjoying of tranquility with her two friends.
But tonight was a little different. When they came back to the hotel from the dinner and they heard something rather noisy inside their room. They were scared to open the door and Vivi went to the counter to ask for help, then they came back and opened the door the light illuminated all the whole room immdiately. In that moment "Oh my god!" they cried together.
The room was all messy, everything was on dropped down to the floor, and the window was broken rather than open, and the snow had come though into the room and was rather cold. No one was in the room, although someone or something had escaped.
They initial fright scared was soon replaced by anger and one of her friends started to cry despite herself. Vivi quickly checked everything in the room, especially the safe in the wardrobe. Fortunately, nothing valuable was missing.
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