job request . correct me please
Dear sir;
I am writing to you regarding your employment vacancies.
you mentioned that there are many position on demand. I don't have expirment in the educational field before, however. I am familiar with the management role and requirements. And as long as my passion is working in schools, I hope you take a look at my resume in the attachment. I also want to mention that I am ready for an unpaid internship term to prove my ability to add value to the organization.
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job request . correct me please
Dear sir,
I am writing to you regarding your employment vacancies.
You mentioned that there are many positions on demand. I don't have experience in the educational field. However, I am familiar with management roles and requirements. I am passionate about working in schools, and I hope you take a look at my resume in the attachment. I would also like to mention that I am willing to take on an unpaid internship term to prove my ability to add value to the organization.
'And as long as my passion is working in schools" Normally, we try not to begin a sentence with "And".
"I also want to mention..." is correct grammatically, however we would normally say "I would also like to" to be more formal/polite.
"I am ready for an unpaid internship..." is also correct, but it is more natural to say "I am willing to taking on an unpaid internship" or "I am open to an unpaid internship.
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job request . correct me please
Dear Sir;
With regard to your employment vacancy, you mentioned that there are several positions available. Although, I do not have previous experience in the educational field, I am familiar with the management role and requirements therein. My passion is working in the school system. Please review my attached resume. I would also like to mention that I am prepared for an unpaid internship term in order to prove that my abilities add value to your organization.
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