Corrections · 3
Integrated essay for the TOEFL. My attempt.
Nebular hypothesis
In the reading passage we learnt about the nebular hypothesis. It suggests that 4-5 million years ago a giant cloud of dust and gas, which is called a nebular, started it’s rotation due to gravitational forces. Even though 99 percent of this cloud mass was helium and hydrogen, a huge variety of other elements were also present. Later this revolving cloud became the Sun and planets. In other words, the planetary solar system where we live now was formed. Moreover, from the reading passage, we know that the process of the Sun's formation from the revolving cloud is called a "collapse".
Further information about this process was given in a lecture. Referring to the nebular hypothesis during the lecture, the professor introduced us to recent experiments in science that were done using new computers. According to the lecturer, the main target of this research was to make a model of a collapse. The goal of this research was to verify how theoretics of solar system formation corresponds with computational modeling. The results inferred that the stars and planet forming from a cloud which consists of gas and dust, is a natural process. Even more so, it is rather the rule that a planet could be formed as a result of this process. The professor concluded that scientists now want to use computations to examine the possibility of the existence of such a planet that supports life.
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
