The concert
I went to the concert last night, cause it's him, James Blunt.
When he first showed up and began to sing the song' so far gone'. I can't help myself but to cry. I didn't know why, maybe I was too excited.
He kept singing when the concert began. We followed his voice. We cheered, We shouted, We laughed, and we all love him. When he sang the famous song ' you are beautiful' .Everyone sang with him, it's so grand. And I cried again.
I love you, James.
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The concert
I went to the --> a concert last night, cause it's him, James Blunt.
When he first showed up and began to sing the song' so far gone'. I can't --> couldn't help myself but to cry. I didn't know why, maybe I was too excited.
He kept singing when --> once the concert began. We followed his voice. We cheered, We --> we shouted, We --> we laughed, and we all love him. When he sang the famous song ' you are beautiful' .Everyone sang with him, it's --> was so grand. And I cried again.
I love you, James.
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