You can check my essay???
You can check my essay??please!!!
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Привет Даниил!
I hope you are well. Guess where I was last weekend?
I went to a big zoo with my family. The weather was great.
There were a lot of people there, especially children.
I saw a tiger, a bear, a monkey, a giraffe and a fox.
The tiger was so big and terrible! (maybe you mean "lion", so that you're not repeating tiger twice?)
The tiger was so big and furious that I didn't come close to the cage.
The fox was very bright and not so big. Its tail is very nice.
We stayed there until late evening. What about you? Did you play football last weekend?
Write me back soon.
Danya
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Great work, very few mistakes! I've corrected the indefinite article "A" for the definite article "THE". This is because you have already mentioned those animals in the previous sentence, so the first mention needs the indefinite article, but the following mentions need the definite article
Example: I saw a lion (first time: A). The lion was big (Second time: The). I saw the same lion (Third time: The again). Then I saw a different lion (this is a new lion, it's the first time I say anything about him, so A)
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The tiger was so big and terrifying(it is better like this)
The tiger
The fox
It’s
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Guess where I was last weekend.
(Don’t need to say big and terrible and then big and furious after. Just say this: The tiger was so big and terrifying that...)
The fox was bright red...
Its tail was very nice
(Instead or ‘write me back soon’ - it’s more appropriate/polite to say ‘I look forward to your reply’)
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