I cook
Usualy I cook every day. I have regular eating for lose weight. I boil the chicken, rice, fish and fry onions. To tome a day I peel carrots and eat it instead the apple when I haven't enough money to buy a grocceries. I need 3 month to lose 17 kg. Already I have lost my weight 2 yers ago.
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Hi! Very nice attempt. I have some corrections below:
I cook
Usually I cook every day. I have regular eating for lose eat regularly to lose weight. I boil the chicken, rice, fish and fry onions. To tome (I don't know what you mean by "To tome"; two times?) a day I peel carrots and eat it them instead of the apples when I haven't enough money to a buy groceries. I need 3 months to lose 17 kg. Already, I have lost my weight from 2 years ago.
You could also write the last sentence as: "I have already lost my weight from 2 years ago" to sound even more like a native!
Best of luck!
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