The end of the universe
The space and time beginn in a compact partical around 14 billion years ago. From they on the universe expands. There are three different theory how the universe could end. The first theory is the big freeze, the second: the big rip and the third: Big crunch.
The end of the universe is depends on three things: the dark energy in universe, shape of the expands ans the expanding rate.
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The end of the universe
The space and time began in a compact partical (word choice - I don't think this is the correct word but I don't know precicely what you want to convey) around 14 billion years ago. From then on the universe expanded. There are three different theory (about/as too) how the universe could end. The first theory is the big freeze, the second: the big rip and the third: big crunch. (the punctuation here is not idiomatic/correct and there are many possible re-writes for this list).
The end of the universe is depends on three things: the dark energy in universe, the shape of the expands (word choice - I don't think this is the correct word but I don't know precicely what you want to convey) and the rate of expansion.
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