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I have always liked going to school, except now that I study at University, because sometimes I do not feel like doing homework or getting up, I have become a little lazy. I loved elementary school because I liked spending time with my friends and classmates, we had a lot of fun, I liked when we used to play soccer with the girls of B because we always ended up in fights and we dared. Also I liked my PE classes the teacher gave us a lot of games. When I was in fifth grade. I joined the school's marching band and I used to play the drum, I was also in the marching band in first and second grade in middle school, but when I got into third grade, I had to leave to joined the color guard. There was a time when I was in fifth grade that I was failing history and I still don't understand why, I haven't considered it a difficult subject, I've always liked reading and editing workshop classes. I used to participate in the dances, when I was in my first year in middle school I joined the dance club of the school and I participated in a contest, we danced the Sandunga but we got fifth place.
When I was in freshman in high school I participated in a dance contest and this time we won second place. In high school I was also part of the color guard this time as a flag bearer because I had the best grade in the class. From elementary school to high school, I got the best class grade. My classmates hated me for that, they said I was the teacher's pet, I must confess I miss those days.
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Hello! I was wondering if you can correct this for me.
I have always liked going to school, except now that I study at university. Sometimes I do not feel like doing homework or getting up. I have become a little lazy. I loved elementary school because I liked spending time with my friends and classmates. We had a lot of fun, and I liked when we used to play soccer with the girls of B because we always ended up in fights and we dared. (Not sure quite what you mean by 'we dared'?) Also I liked my PE classes because the teacher gave us a lot of games. When I was in fifth grade, I joined the school's marching band and I used to play the drum. I was also in the marching band in first and second grade in middle school, but when I got into third grade, I had to leave to join the color guard. There was a time when I was in fifth grade that I was failing history and I still don't understand why. I didn't consider it a difficult subject, and I've always liked reading and editing workshop classes. I used to participate in the dances. When I was in my first year in middle school I joined the dance club of the school and I participated in a contest. We danced the Sandunga but we got fifth place.
When I was in freshman in high school I participated in a dance contest and this time we won second place. In high school I was also part of the color guard this time as a flag bearer because I had the best grade in the class. From elementary school to high school, I got the best class grade. My classmates hated me for that, and they said I was the teacher's pet. I must confess I miss those days.
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Hello! I was wondering if you can correct this for me.
I have always liked going to school, except now that I study at University, because sometimes I do not feel like doing homework or getting up. I have become a little lazy. I loved elementary school because I liked spending time with my friends and classmates because we had a lot of fun. I liked when we used to play soccer with the girls of B because we always ended up in fights and dares. Also I liked my PE classes because the teacher gave us a lot of games. When I was in fifth grade. I joined the school's marching band and I used to play the drum. I was also in the marching band in first and second grade in middle school, but when I got into third grade, I had to leave to joined the color guard. There was a time when I was in fifth grade that I was failing history and I still don't understand why because I didn't consider it a difficult subject. I've always liked reading and editing workshop classes. I used to participate in the dances. When I was in my first year in middle school, I joined the dance club of the school and I participated in a contest. We danced the Sandunga but we got fifth place.
When I was in freshman in high school, I participated in a dance contest and that time we won second place. In high school I was also part of the color guard this time as a flag bearer because I had the best grade in the class. From elementary school to high school, I got the best grades. My classmates hated me for that and said I was the teacher's pet. I must confess I miss those days.
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