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Reply to a friend. Exercise informal letter. PLEASE CORRECT IT Hi Jack, thank you for your invitation. It's a great time to have a break from my studies! I've just read an ad for a play at Alhabra Theatre , and fortunately, on Saturday, there will be the last performance. Honestly, I've never heard of it before, but a lot of newspapers are telling about it as a sort of masterpiece and as something not to miss it! Just yesterday Sue and Milo contacted me and I asked them if they would join us and they replied were keen of it. Moreover, they asked me if works for us going to eat something afterward. Unfortunately, we don't know good restaurants in that area. Could you suggest us any?

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Reply to a friend. Exercise informal letter. PLEASE CORRECT IT

Hi Jack,
Thank you for your invitation. It's a great time to have a break from my studies!

I've just read an ad for a play at Alhambra Theatre, and fortunately, on Saturday, there will be the last performance. Honestly, I've never heard of it before, but a lot of newspapers are telling talking about it as a sort of masterpiece and as something not to miss! it!

Just yesterday Sue and Milo contacted me and I asked them if they would join us. and They replied they were keen of on it. Moreover, they asked me if it works for us going to go eat something afterward. Unfortunately, we don't know good restaurants in that area. Could Can you suggest us any?

I crossed out "fortunately" because there is nothing to indicate why it's a good thing that Saturday is their last performance.

You have a good conversational style of writing.

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