私の日本語の練習 文章を直してください。
天気は穏やかだ。❤️
空のかなたを見上げて、たくさんいろを見える。青色だけではなく、単色の青いよりも青色だ。
海が前進歩行時は、微細な砂をかんじられる。砂の下は命がたくさんいるだね。カニが楽しみ互いに隠れんばを遊ぶ。どこに他の方を知っているけど、私はこっそり見ることです。
しゃがむ砂を接触と、左は蟻が角砂糖は運んだ。メートル離れる風をを飛ばすの小さな子供に落とすされた。急に強い風が吹いて、木の葉が海に落ちが流れ着いた。
大小の生物の動作が見たとは壮観だ。一緒にスペースを同じ共有しています。豊かな自然です。その時点では生活のことが考えると、自分は不必要のこともう恐れるのを大切なの生活の事を見逃した。未来が。
The weather looks calm.
When I look up at the distant sky, I can see colors. It's not only blue, but it has more than just a single blue that described as BLUE.
As I walk forward to the sea, I feel the fine sand under my feet.
But below the sand, there are many lives. The crabs look very happy to play hide and seek with each other. I know where the other one hides, but I just secretly watch them.
As I squat down to touch the sand, I can see the ants are carrying sugar cubes that were dropped by the little boy who is pulling a kite just from a few meters away from me. When a sudden strong wind blows, the leaves fall into the water. It drifted away with the waves.
It's a magnificent view to see the movement of small living things. Staying together and share the same spaces. The richness of nature.
When I think about my life at that moment, I've missed out a lot on the importance of life worrying about the unnecessary things. The future.
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私の日本語の練習 文章を直してください。
天気は穏やかだ。❤️
空のかなたを見上げると（…すると）て、たくさんいろがを見える。単色の青色だけではなく、単色の青いよりも青色だ。→たくさんの青色がある
海が前進歩行に向(む)かって歩く時は、微細な砂をかんじられる。砂の下は命がたくさんいるだね。カニが楽しそうにみ互いに隠れんぼばをして遊ぶ。どこに他の方を隠れているか(隠れる/隠れます:to hide)知っているけど、私はこっそり見ることでます。
しゃがんで(…て)む砂にさわるを接触と、左は蟻が角砂糖をは運んでいるだ。数(すう)メートル離れてる風を凧(たこ)を飛ばしているすの小さな子供に落とすされたものだ。急に強い風が吹いて、木の葉が海に落ちてが流された着いた。
大小の生物の動作がを見たとるのは壮観だ。一緒に同じスペースを同じ共有しています。豊かな自然です。その時点では生活人生(じんせい)のことをが考えると、自分は不必要のなことをもう恐れるのを大切なの生活人生のでたくさんの事を見逃した。未来をが。
人生is total life of people , 生活 is more practical like eat ,work, sleep
The weather looks calm.
When I look up at the distant sky, I can see colors. It's not only blue, but it has more than just a single blue that described as BLUE.
As I walk forward to the sea, I feel the fine sand under my feet.
But below the sand, there are many lives. The crabs look very happy to play hide and seek with each other. I know where the other one hides, but I just secretly watch them.
As I squat down to touch the sand, I can see the ants are carrying sugar cubes that were dropped by the little boy who is pulling a kite just from a few meters away from me. When a sudden strong wind blows, the leaves fall into the water. It drifted away with the waves.
It's a magnificent view to see the movement of small living things. Staying together and share the same spaces. The richness of nature.
When I think about my life at that moment, I've missed out a lot on the importance of life worrying about the unnecessary things. The future.
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